Re: Daybreak ColoHill: THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!
However, I must say that I am sorry you are experiencing the pain that has caused you to write it.
Daybreak lostboy: sirens call
through stillborn air
on shallow distant wind
my mind is fixed
and buried there
with in those words again
my hearts own voice
though muffled,
screams
through flesh
and solid bone
recalling as the mourning comes
again
I
am
alone
Re: Daybreak unhappy: i can relate
Re: Daybreak lostboy: Thank you both,
I wrote it just before I went to sleep the other night.
Bad day..
I'm glad some one can relate though, I honestly wasn't expecting a response at all I just needed to get out my feelings and put them into some tanigible form.
Lostboy
Re: Daybreak jadedangel: [quote author=lostboy link=topic=18539.msg166985#msg166985 date=1126661567">
I honestly wasn't expecting a response at all I just needed to get out my feelings and put them into some tanigible form.
Lostboy
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[color=navy"> Sometimes a tangible form .... speaks volumes to those who read them..
Nice job --- [/color">
